Mother is the sweetest gift of life,
Without her, I can’t dream to thrive.
She loves, cares and never complains,
She’s Panacea who takes away my pains.
My mother, I touch your pious feet,
In my discordant life, you are a blissful beat.
As Almighty created this wonderful Earth,
You have composed and given me birth.
When tears roll down my dazzling eyes,
With a doting hug, you help me rise.
For my long life you devotedly pray,
Your scrumptious delicacies perfect my day.
O goddess, what a charm you possess!
When gloominess surrounds, you bless.
In every happy moment and painful cry,
Your hands I hold and reach the shining sky.
That’s true and beautifully written
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Thanks Sayar for the appreciation 🙂
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Welcome friend…
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It takes strength to write on mum….. beautiful poem…wish I too could write a poem for my mum
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Yes. You can write it. Just feel and write. 🤗
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Have tried…but it’s difficult to write on my mother
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Ok. There may be some reasons. But believe me, close your eyes, feel, think and write whatever comes to ur mind. U can keep it a secret. You will feel good after u look to ur work. It will be true and wonderful. 🙂
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Ok… will make a try😊😊
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Yeah 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you Ayesha! I am glad to hear that 🙂
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🙂
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Sure Ayesha.
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Lovely poem 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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A really beautiful tribute to mother. You’ve done so well. Yes, mother is gold. Can you imagine a world without mothers. Many things will go wrong.
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True. I cannot dream of it 🙂
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They are so caring; and always present. We fathers need to do more don’t we?
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Yeah. Yes, fathers need to help them too.
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Many fathers are already doing so well but more need to come on board.
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Yes. I have no much clue about it as I am young and my father helps my mother. Some of the uncles are really not cooperative. So yes.
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It’s been nice sharing with you. I do hope that when you grow older and get married you will make a difference. Women love it when their spouses are more involved in raising the children.
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Hope so 🙂
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It’s a pleasure to hear that 🙂 It is a wonderful poem!
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Thank you!
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😁
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Beautiful and moving.
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Thanks for taking out time to read! It’s a pleasure to hear that it inspired u 🙂
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It did. 🙂
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powerful
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Thank you, Antony!
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such a nice poem yaar. great
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Thank you, Vaibhaw! Happy that u liked it 🙂
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My mother isn’t alive but this is a beautiful reminder of how lucky I am to have had her as my mum. Tears flowing here..
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Sad to hear that. Cheer up! So many memories with her… cherish them. She is always with u as your strength 🙂
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True, she is always with me in spirit and is only ever a thought away. 🙂
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Yes ☺
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I love it!
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Thanks for reading 😁
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Very beautifully written!
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Thanks!! 🙂
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Wonderful to have a mother who is worthy of praise and a son who recognizes her worth.
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Thank you 🙂
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It is indeed a lovely ode. No human being is as happy as he who appreciates what he has and is grateful to his parents. When that happens, the mother can finally rest assure she did a good job. Not all mothers can say that and not all children are that lucky. Your words are very well chosen, giving this poem the perfect flow able to convey your noble feeling. Thank you for inviting me to read it, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Thank u so much. Your words are so true. Kudos.😊
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This is so beautifully written! Wonderful!💜💜💜😭
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Thanks Shreyas. Nice to hear from u, buddy 🙂
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Pleasure’s mine, brother!
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Beautifully penned and a wonderful tribute to your mother.
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Thank u Papeya! 😊😊
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Lovely tribute. Well penned. 🌹
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Thank you 🙂 It fills my heart with jubilance after hearing that.
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You’re welcome friend. 😊
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🙂
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Very well written. You seem to like rhymes as much as I do..
As a person who writes a lot, even I wrote something about my mother. There are poems about my parents, my friends, and others if you ever want to read them.
Keep writing. 🙂
This one is for my mom:
https://adarshakharel.wordpress.com/2016/06/24/my-marvellous-mom/
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Thank you. Yes, I love rhymes. There is something or the other that is common in poets.
Wow! That is great to hear that you write about your loved and dearest ones. I will surely read them.
U too keep writing and reading 🙂
Yeah, I will surely read and give my feedback there.
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Beautiful 🙂 Thanks for the support, by the way.
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Thank u!! It’s my pleasure to support 🙂
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You’re most welcome!!
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🙂
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That was amazing man!
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Thanks 😊
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Your welcome!
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Wonderful work, Akash! The last line is especially perfect.
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Thank you Isabel! 😊
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh snap!! What a poem! You know, in a time where I see of lot of teenagers that love to bash their parents, your poem is like a breath of fresh air. I see you express a profound, true appreciation of mothers, and it makes me so happy, especially since I myself feel really close to my mother. Thank you. 🙂
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Thank you! Yes, these days many teenagers tend to disrespect them, but that’s wrong. 🙂
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A lovely poem filled with love and appreciation.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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This poem is well-written! I am sure you have inspired a lot of children to beautifully express their love for their mothers.
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Thank you! Yes, I have tried to 🙂
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Beautiful explanation of how much a mom’s impact is! ☺️
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Thank you! True, a mother has a tremendous impact on a child’s upbringing. She can be the path to glory for the child. Her support and love really is very crucial for a well-being. It’s important by the fathers too.
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Beautifully written.
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Thanks Taniya 🙂
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Pleasure
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I’m glad I visited to read you Akash 🙂
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I’m happy too ☺ Keep reading 👍
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Great poem!
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Thank you Luna! I am happy u enjoyed it . 🙂
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Beautiful! I can only pray my children can view me in such a way! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you. Sure, they will. 🙂
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Thanks for your sweet words!
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How beautiful! Well described.
In awe with this thought -> “She’s Panacea who takes away my pains.”
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Thanks 😊
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Liked It!
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Thanks ! 😊
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Lovely!
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Thank you Savvy 🙂
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Lovely, Akash.
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Thanks, Sumit 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank u 😊
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Wow beautifully written
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Thanks for reading 😊
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Lovely, every sentence reverberates with love. Enjoy every moment with your mum! I miss my mum.
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Thank you 😊
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powerful words ….
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautifully written !
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Thanks ☺
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Lovely lines.
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Thank you. I hope they touched your heart 🙂
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Beautifully written.. Awesome post and well expressed.
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Thank you. 😊
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You’re welcome
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Awesome post. Beautifully written.Keep it up
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Thanks a lot!
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A beautiful poem expressing all emotions so well.
Keep it up 👍
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That’s very kind of you, chum! 😀
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Heart 💕touching
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Thanks 😀
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